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The "Inbox Hack": How to Send a Cold Email That Actually Gets You Hired in Nigeria
To write a cold email that gets a response from a Nigerian recruiter, you must avoid the "begging" mindset. Instead of asking for "any job," you must offer specific value. Your subject line is the most critical part; it should be clear and professional (e.g., "Graphic Designer Portfolio - Helping Brand X Grow"). Keep the email under 150 words, address the recruiter by name, and end with a specific request for a 10-minute chat, not just "a job".
Why "Dear Sir/Ma" is Killing Your Chances
If your email subject line is "Application for Employment" and your opening line is "Dear Sir/Ma, I am a humble graduate looking for any opportunity," you are deleting your own chances.
Recruiters in Lagos are busy. They receive hundreds of "begging" emails daily. To stand out, you need to switch from asking for a favor to offering a solution.
The Golden Rule: Subject Lines That Get Opened
The subject line is the "Gatekeeper." If it’s boring, your email will never be read.
Bad: "Job Application" or "Hello" or "CV for Review"
Good (For an advertised role): "Application: Sales Manager - [Your Name] - 5 Years Exp"
Great (For networking/No opening): "Quick Question regarding [Company Name]'s SEO Strategy" or "Proposal: How I can help [Company Name] save on logistics".
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2 Templates You Can Copy-Paste Today
Template 1: The "Specific Value" Pitch (Best for Networking)
Use this when there is no advertised job, but you want to work for them.
Subject: Idea for [Company Name]’s Social Media
Hi [Recruiter Name],
I’ve been following [Company Name] on Instagram for a while, and I love your recent campaign on [Topic].
I noticed that your TikTok page isn't as active, which is a huge missed opportunity for reaching Gen Z. In my last role as a Social Media Intern, I grew our TikTok to 50k followers in 3 months.
I’d love to share a few ideas on how [Company Name] can do the same. Are you open to a 10-minute chat next Tuesday?
Best, [Your Name] [Link to Portfolio]
Template 2: The "Follow-Up" (If you applied but heard nothing)
Use this 1 week after applying online.
Subject: Application Follow-Up: [Job Title] - [Your Name]
Hi [Recruiter Name],
I know you’re likely swamped with applications for the [Job Title] role, but I wanted to ensure my application didn’t get lost.
I’m particularly excited about this role because my experience in [Skill A] aligns perfectly with your goal to [Company Goal].
I’ve attached my CV again for convenience. I’d love the chance to discuss how I can help the team hit its Q3 targets.
Best, [Your Name]
Final Verdict
Cold emailing is a numbers game. You might send 10 emails and get 1 reply. But that 1 reply can change your career. Be bold, be brief, and be valuable.
Want more templates? Download our "Cold Email Swipe File" in the Resources section!